Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Anti Marriage

How do you spell the tired sound? Is it Pfew?

Anyway, the big arguments-against-marriage-equality-page(-draft) is finished at isocrat.org.

http://isocrat.org/politics/marriage/anti_marriage.php

I've very much appreciated the editing many of you have offered in the past and am begging for more.

Aside from spelling and grammar, have we missed anything, any big argument? Is there anything that should be removed, cut down, or even expanded upon? And tone, too grumpy, or too weak in places?

2 comments:

Pancakes said...

You should check out my post, Why Gay Marriage is Wrong. I am sure you will be able to pick up some ideas from that.

Scot said...

Pancakes, you bigot ;-)